Score: 7

"it was pretty well animated, when it was"

submission: Seizure Of Power

date: August 11, 2007

I have no real athstetic problems with the movie, except some reused animation

the main problem was that it really thought it was cool but it wasn't really that cool

more boring/headache inducing than cool

Score: 3

"Very dissapointing"

submission: Awesome Compilation Vol 1

date: July 26, 2007

None of those 3 things would have gotten front page if they were by themselves, they were poorly animated and not particularly funny. The Mario one was especially weak. The whole mario = drugs thing is so overplayed it's not even funny.

If anyone thinks that this thing's score is based on actual merit and not the previous metal gear awesome, they're not really paying attention.

If you had had more shorts, that had better jokes it would have been a lot better. I'm trying to seem constructive here, but I just really didn't enjoy that at all.

Score: 5

"It was alright I guess"

submission: Apartment 51 - Ep. 10

date: December 5, 2006

From what I see you appear to read reviews so giving an actual critique will be worthwhile here

Animation-wise, it seems to me that your characters are designed to not have mouths, which is just laziness on your part. There is no real animation here, so that needs to be improved as well.

The voice acting is pretty good so I don't really have any complaints there.

The writing isn't too great, it seems (from the couple of episodes I've seen) that you are just trying to be zany all the time instead of structuring good plots and jokes. Not only that, but it appears you often (maybe unintentionally) steal jokes from the simpsons/family guy/whatever

As for the general concept of the series, it's kind of short-sighted and weak. There is no real justification for the series and the fact the characters are monsters are completely irrelevant to the series. It occurs to me you probably just took this route to avoid lip sync. As much as I hate doing lip sync and can sympathize, that's pretty weak on your part

barely passable, if you want to make a good or great web series, you are probably going to have to either start over or heavily revamp

Score: 10

"Great Game- I Beat it!!"

submission: Paths

date: September 30, 2006

An Hour later, my hand about to explode, I beat that game.

It's the perfect balance of puzzle solving and skill, and it's hard without being TOO hard. (although some would debate)

Score: 8

"Hahahaha, that's pretty gross"

submission: The Ultimate Orgy

date: August 9, 2006

A lot of people are dissing this based on how utterly homosexual it is, but the animation was top notch and the song wasn't a bad cover.

If you don't mind this opinion coming from someone who doesn't want to watch the whole thing

Score: 6

"I've said it before,"

submission: Tomorrow's Nobodies Ep.5

date: August 8, 2006

TN is the most professionally produced series on newgrounds, but you guys can't get passed the immature and easy jokes.

I was really hoping this would be good, I wanted it to be, but I found myself kind of bored and there was no real plot. Everything felt like it was setup for a good ending, but it was a total cop-out.

Live action stuff in flashes never work out, it breaks the reality of the series and makes the whole production seem worse.

Tomorrows Nobodies is still better than College University (which doesn't even attempt to make jokes), but what you really need in the series is to come back to the ground every once in a while for realism. I know this is only one review out of a sea of "I LOVE YOU!!!"s, but I think that you guys should spend more itme on writing the actual episodes, and try to be clever instead of random.

Chase: Keep up the good work as far as animation, but youyr character is really uneeded and drags down the series as far as I can see. You're just a pothead version of David who there is occasionally thrown half a fat joke at. If you want the series to be as good as possible, cut out Chase and replace him with a made up character who chase could even voice who is more dynamic.

Hell, while you guys are at it you could cut out Chris, eric is already the straight-man to David's craziness, and I think that TN as a series could pretty much be scrapped.

You guys as a group have plenty of potential to make another better series that has characters instead of rough characterizations of yourselves. I think if you guys worked hard enough you guys COULD make something television-worthy, but this definitely isn't it.

Score: 9

"That was well done and enjoyable"

submission: Flash Comedy Extravaganza

date: June 4, 2006

Although my biggest success is centered around cameos and pop culture references, I agree that too many flashes rely on that tactic, and I'm glad that people like you are around to make sure that there is more to flash than tweens and zany pop culture references.

This was pretty funny and well animated and stuff, you did a good job

Score: 6

"Good animation, wasn't very funny"

submission: Chuck Murdock #001

date: May 12, 2006

The concept is kind of funny and the animation was good, but the voice acting could use a little work.

The Armpit fucking thing wasn't very funny and it sort of took away from the whole thing to go out on that note

Score: 10

"Better animated than most television shows"

submission: the YuYu

date: May 6, 2006

To be honest, I'm not a huge fan of the series, but I really enjoyed this one.

You deserve all the praise you get.

Score: 4

"Wasn't the best."

submission: Tomorrow's Nobodies Ep.4

date: May 6, 2006

Good animation and voice acting, but the writing is really lacking.

I used to kind of like this series, but since Chase came in I've been slowly disliking it more and more.

It's needlessly offensive and falls back on penis jokes and stoner jokes, which is why you guys are never going to get a real series.

If you are really serious about getting an actual show (I remember you pitching the pilot to networks) you're going to have to get a little more high-brow, and not so much rely on the animation to carry you, since in the format of an actual show the animation would be outsourced.

Good job with the Animation and Voice acting, but please work harder on writing, for your own and the viewers sake.